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Here is my DeviantArt “Tomb Raider” contest entry. For a “step by step” process, CLICK on the Image above.
After I complete an image, I like to do a self critique, seeing how an image can be improved. Below is my Personal Postmortem.
What worked?
- The image came together fast.
- I had an idea of Lara Croft, sporting her bow and semi drawing an arrow as she exits the wreck strewn shore. She survived her first challenge, but what lies ahead?
- One thumnbail design.
- For something different, I used Poser for the rough character pose, then added further detail to the mockup in the paint program.
- Printing this out as a guide, I then illustrated the image with pencil on my lap-board. Scanning the design, I then concentrated on tonal values and colour on the computer.Â
What could use improvement?
- Better Composition. It would have be better if character was less front-on. Look at more dynamic angles like a lower viewpoint. So more thumbnail variations could have revealed this early in the design.
- Lighting. It’s not bad, but more intensity is needed in the Lighting, to help add interest and emphasis to the character. Another light source could have been hinted at.
- More Colour Variation. The large amount of stormy grey subdues this design.
- Larger Character. More emphasis on facial expressions. I ‘did’ deliberately design this image with extra detail left and right of character, so image could be cropped later as needed.
- Character Facial Expression. Its no news to me that I need practice with character expressions. This is something I am working on, so expect to see more face studies in the future.
As always, it was a great learning experience.
More Soon,
Beeno!